My first banana

For literacy this week, we are doing and type of writing based on a chosen a picture. So, for literacy, I chose a picture of a dragon and did a narrative about it. Next we had to complete our piece of writing. Next, we had to have it buddy-checked by 3 different people. Then we had to publish it on our blog.

you can have a look below to see my writing.

My First Banana

The time is 1543, 3:33 pm, A 3 minute late delivery delivered by a messenger dragon…

We are here, in the Nobunaga castle,  there are 2 birds and a messenger dragon that cannot talk…

“Hmmm.” said Nobunaga, the king of the castle. “Hmmm” said Kimichi, the the queen of the castle. “Mmmm” said the messenger dragon. “What is this yellow thing? It smells really weird and it is yellow and mushy.” said Nobunaga. Then, his wife said “I think the dragon is trying to tell us to peel it and eat it”. “ but then” said Nobunaga as he peeled the weird yellow thing “the dragon will laugh at us, should I decapitate it?” “ no.” “not the yellow thing, the dragon!!!” “no” “fine” they argued.

Then suddenly, the king’s servant (the monkey named Masamori) entered the room…

“Oooohh” said Masamori, “what is that? How did you get it? Can I eat it? OMG THAT IS SO AMAZING!!! Oh, and most of all… can I eat it?” “yes” “really?” “yes” “really?” “yes” “really?” “yes” “really?” “yes” “really?” “yes” “wow” They rapidly repeated to each other as Masamori took the weird yellow thing we were talking about and took a bite, “wow!!! This is so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so DELICIOUS!!!” he said as he finished the weird-yellow-thing-the-messenger-dragon-called-the-bah-nah-nah and threw the bah-nah-nah peel on the floor, “that suits you” said Nobunaga

Then, the otter servant (I meant the Other servant) named Iromasam came in and slipped on the bah-nah-nah peel and face-planted.

Then, the two birds took the bah-nah-nah peel and yelled ”let’s make people slip using the bah-nah-nah peel!!!”,  “that suits you” came a muffled and suspicious noise that sounded suspiciously like Iromasam.

The dragon then flew off to send a message to the tribe who sent the bananas.

The legend says that Masamori was the first thing to eat a banana… , or maybe he wasn’t…