A few days ago, in writing, we did a type of writing called experience writing. So what we did first was that we went outside in groups and played around with mud. After we had finished and washed our hands, we started to make a plan about what mud felt like, sounds like and looks like. See the screenshot below to read my writing.
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ReplyDeletei like how you did you sentences
ReplyDeleteHi Jed, I really loved the way that you put in a lot of effort and information in your writing. I also wrote that and I also finished! But you should do the writing instead of a picture... Also the picture is hard to read.
ReplyDeletethank you, and you can click on the photo to make it a bit bigger.
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Deleteoh i forgot to tell you to make it a little bigger
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ReplyDeleteHi Jed this writing is amazing. I like how you put lots of wow words and adjectives in it.Maybe next time you could use words that younger people can understand.When I did this writing I made sure that it made sense like yours. Well Done!
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DeleteHi Jed I´m Tyson I love the way you used WOW words and descriptive language. Next time you could add pictures on your writing. I remember doing that but mine wasn´t as good as yourś.
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