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Friday 1 December 2017

The Pigeon Should Stay Up Late

For a few days, we have been reading a series of pigeon books. After that, we had to make a piece of opinion writing that says whether we are with or against what the pigeon thinks. Please give a comment about my writing that I have done below.







I am confirming in my head, that the pigeon should stay up late.

One of my many reasons to let the pigeon stay up late is for him to learn from the educational video about birds that he was talking about. He will hopefully learn about Hoatzin birds, Frogmouths, Scarlet-Iiwis, etc, etc. He will also not be able to watch anything else. Only the educational video about birds. Because he gets so bored of it, he might just start singing: Fish and chips and vinegar, vinegar, vinegar, Fish and chips and vinegar, pepper pepper pepper salt, don’t put your rubbish… wait a minute, that is going off the main topic. Go to the next paragraph. That is an order… NOW!!!

He’ll organise a Hotdog party and everyone will get Hot-dogs! The people that will be coming will be: all his toys, the bus driver, the one that needs to brush his teeth, and of course, the pigeon himself. (No! It does not matter that the bus driver and the man that needs to brush his teeth are the same person… He will just get double hotdogs!) And he will get tired from organising it.

The next reason, Is that he will fall asleep eventually. The reason why he will eventually fall asleep is that he would be very full from the hotdogs and also very tired from processing the fact and information from the educational video that he watched. It’s only 1:00 pm… in Alaska. He might just start singing again, Fish and chips and vinegar, vinegar, vinegar, Fish and chips and vinegar, pepper pepper pep… that’s going off the topic again!

Now the pigeon has not only found out what Fregatidae are (maybe). (Fregatidae are a fmaily of seabirds that are found in tropical and subtropical oceans.) but also  that hotdog parties are not good for your health and  falling asleep at 4:00 am will make you very cranky. Plus he has memorised the fish and chips and vinegar song!!! (from constantly singing it in his 3 hour sleep) Fish and chips and vinegar, vinegar, vinegar, Fish and chips and vinegar, pepper pepper pepper salt, don’t put your rubbish in my backyard, my… that is going off task again! Hang on, It is the end of the story, so it doesn't really matter.

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