stick writing

this week, we are persuading people to by a stick. my persuasive writing is right underneath this small paragraph, Have a look!

Sticks around the world .

Are you looking for the perfect gift? Are you always staring at the shops but can’t find whatever you are looking for? Are you always blazing hot by looking for something perfect but you do not know what it is? SURPRISE!!! We have the perfect thing for you, we present… the thing that comes in all shapes and sizes… the fiery Hazy blaze… the caramel colour… the one and only… STICK!!! Did you know that it can be used as an ornament, can be used for stick parties and can be used as an wand. It is made of 99.9% natural wood and 0.1% magic (because it was animus touched by Darkstalker) and will save you from Lord Voldemort. So read on to see what reasons you should get this marvellous and fantas-stick, stick

  Have you ever thought, of using a stick as a wand? Have you ever thought of using spells like Bombarda maxima or expecto patronum? Well, you can. There are lots of different spells like serpensortia, which produces a venomous green viper or a snake even more venomous, and wingardium leviosa, which makes things or humans fly or float. So use your imagination and fly on a broom and go to Hogwarts (it is illegal to use magic out of hogwarts school grounds until you are the age of 13), you can also defeat dementors and ghouls and ghosts and witches and boggarts, that can easily be beaten by the spell, riddikulus.

  Did you also know, that these stick-tacular sticks can be blindingly amazing ornaments? You could attach a ribbon to the stick after decorating it and hang it up on your Christmas tree. And maybe if you could have it to stand up by itself you can decorate the stick and have lots of them around your house, it is almost like having brightly coloured candles all around your house, except it doesn't produce light and warmth ( I’m sorry to say(unless you put it on fire with wax on the outside).). With all the decorations all around your house you will have lots of friends and they will all come in with the warm welcome of the fantastic sticks.

  As well as all that, you can have… a … STICK PARTY!!! You can invite friends and family to the party and all of them have to each bring a special stick and play fun games like spin the stick, and the children can play with imaginary swords, magical wands and steel cutting lightsabers. And the people can get extra sticks to paint to make more ornaments that your house will be as bright as the brightest sun in the whole entire universe!!!

  Overall I think that you can easily defeat Lord Voldemort because you can have waves of stick parties, lots of ornaments and destroy the dementors by using magic. So in 53 seconds immediately say all the spells in the book and buy a wand from your local wand store. Say all the spells again and you will be congratulated. Smoothness, moss, spores,  varnishing, leaves, flowers, paint and dye is optional, if you do this in 53 seconds then email me, your time starts now.