we are learning about volcanoes. we were told to make a presentation about what we learned about volcanoes. can you have a look at what Ie done and comment below so that I can Make it better.
Hi jed I really like that you made it a lot of slides and you made it just like a real animation this is really cool. maybe next time you could add more details about the volcano.
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hi jed i like how you an animation volcano from inquiry. you batter than my slide because you got 400 slide.
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