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Wednesday 5 July 2017

Clouds

For writing, we have been learning about different weather features. The weather feature that I chose was clouds. For the first week, we did lots of research on the feature we chose. on the next week, we made the actual piece of writing. on the third week, we transported the writing that we did to a D.L.O (digital learning object) and share it.




Please comment below and give me feedback.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Jed I love your blog post about clouds it taught me that a cute and fluffy cloud can turn into a ferocious storm. Next time you could shorten it down as it is very long. great presentation keep up the good work!

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    1. Thanks, I really appreciate your feedback on my writing.

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